I think Im falling
in love with you.
But Id rather
Fall in lust
Give me pleasure
Without the pain,
Give me closeness
Without the trust
Give me breathtaking,
Without the beauty,
Give me enjoyment,
Without wasting time
Give me everything youve got,
Without having to make you mine.
Feel the vital kiss,
With a mouth as smooth as oil,
Feel your body ripple,
With a pleasure that shall not spoil.
Feel the intense nature,
Through a simple glance of skin,
Feel your whole mind fill with intensity,
As lust slowly enters in.
Let this animal devour you,
As your want becomes your need,
Let it destroy your morals inside of you,
Until youre let loose, and you are freed
Of every tie youve ever been given,
Of everything youve known as wrong
Now theres a point to living,
If you would just play along.
still wont you please just stay a while?
Can we just stay real close?
Talk to me, it makes me smile,
I like you more than most.
I do adore the pleasure,
But what follows, unthought-of, is pain,
As I realise through this awful scene,
That youll never be mine to gain.
If to thine own self be true,
was the truest quote ever said,
Then you can forget the lust,
Just give me true love instead.
















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I Love you Jarrett Wilkes!
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Tonight I'll leave a message with the stars.. look to them and they will send my whispers of my love
Liked the last line!
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you've expressed those sins perfectly, almost sublimely and i really admire your choice of words!
especially :
'Feel the vital kiss,
With a mouth as smooth as oil,'
very vivid and unique, an ornamental line
gratz
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I liked the last line the most!
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Overall, I really like it, though. Definitely a very successful portrayal of Lust. Keep at it!
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